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Had to make this quick due to work.

Not a lot of difference, but they look more like themselves, if that makes sense.
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~childings Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know if I made this comment here or not (I think I said this on tumblr already), but I agree. They look more like actual people now, the old drawing (while it's still good in a lot of ways) is more cartoonish. I like the term "cartoon shorthand" you used elsewhere, that sums it up pretty well. I like the extra details/realism in the second image. It fits the story a lot better, especially since you opted not to use any sort of internal dialogue (thought bubbles or whatever) for any of the characters

Also, when is TJ gonna get a jacket like that? Does he ever? When they finally get up north I guess, heh
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~Aerpenium Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotten faster I see haha. Yeah, makes a lot of sense and they do! They look more relaxed too. :3
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:iconcabooseblue:
That completely makes sense. I mean, in the old one TJ looks like some majorly badass, mean biker dude, and Amal looks like a wussy scrawny kid in a baggy sweatshirt. You definitely show TJ's laid-back side and Amal's warm heart better in the new image.
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Mood: Joy ~marimaki Sep 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
nice xDD
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:iconnominus-expers:
Makes perfect sense. Awesome stuff.
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:iconphishfulofasha:
Yep! Plus Amal looks... stronger and more relaxed and less angry, while TJ seems... less dazed and melancholy. I love the newer Amal details around the nose and mouth. Top lip looks a lot more kissable.
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~TA15 Sep 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You know you've improved if the new one just took fifteen minutes. Looks gewd. :3
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i think that does makes sense because their faces in the after picture look more expressive!
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:iconpullitapart:
I was like, "Um, this is like the exact freakin same." and then I looked. Nice improvement, I like how you removed the detail between the mouth and the cigarette. Makes it more cartoony, but looks better and less duck facey. :thumbsup:
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...and you got one hell of a lot faster! o_O
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